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tony vialy
tony vialy
Indonesia, JAVA, JAKARTA

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PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR SMILE

Please leave me
To get your dream
I 'dont want to see you regret
To get a happiness living

I can't stand to see you hopeless
To swallowed all your dream
With all your ambition to get a good future
And all your wish

I don't wanna see you regret
Living in my short live
With all my suffering dying
And my emptyness day

Please honey don't be sad
i just want to see you get your dream
To reach all you want without me
That can make me have a calmness end

Forgive me to make you sad
Pass over your live without me
Just one thing i want you to show me
Honey , please give me your last smile......

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