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mikerotheatre
Mike Rogers
United Kingdom

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Life and Art

When I was adolescent, I wrote sonnets,
Shakespearean, the rhymes tucked into place,
Enjambements, the lot, each one ten minutes.
It only takes me five now, but the pace
Of life has quickened, which explains the speed
- Unless I've just become more superficial,
And agonising's vanished with the need
To give tradition's stiffening to the wishful
Thinking about the schoolgirls on the bus
I wanted to impress with words, words, words.
They liked the poems. Was it worth the fuss?
Learning to be a Bard to pull the birds?
Holding, not pulling, is the poet's curse
I know now, and write sarcasm in free verse.

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Comment by: - 2006-07-05 02:04
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Using the form to ambush the form â?? poem as Trojan Horse. Witty and wise.
jkaber Comment by: jkaber - 2006-04-02 16:50
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This is very funny!
auscowster Comment by: auscowster - 2006-02-07 08:23
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i realy enjoyed it and i agree the more that i read the more that i see good work thanks for the chance to read it
Charmain Comment by: Charmain - 2005-12-08 06:13
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ya know, I have read this piece a few times now since you posted it on here. and everytime I go back and read it, I get something new from it. I can almost picture you sitting on a bus now telling tales and reciting poetry to people. I bet ya have a nice voice.
This poem is totally briliant, and well worth reading again and again.
Comment by: - 2005-09-06 14:48
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Well, you may have learnt not to, but you can still write a perfect sonnet! Plenty of meat on the metre too...
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