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Renatta
ren simon
United States, oklahoma, blanchard

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Take a while

Take a while to read this simpile poem.......




A timeless matter awakens in my heart a lovely color of smoke rises.Out of a smog a dint is born,now a stream of red pours out of me.

My life has been hard and cruel I wish I was dead on some days.But the thing that keeps me alive is the wonder of my future.

If I am meant to be a writer or am I meant to fail at everything I have worked for.I love my family and that keeps me sane and alive.

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lufkinmom Comment by: lufkinmom - 2006-07-28 15:30
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very good
simowierdo Comment by: simowierdo - 2006-07-26 09:36
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mmmhhhhmmmm...very sweet. it's simple and unique. thanks!
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