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Comment by: jkaber - 2006-04-02 16:38
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| This poem does have a nice flow and I like the topic/question: Do I love you as yesterday? Something, of course, that we can never quite do, we can only love you as we do today. Delicious words in your poem, but the meaning got a little lost midway through. |
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| Very lovely. great word choices. I like the flow of this poem |
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Comment by: poety55 - 2006-03-12 16:20
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| I really, truly loved this. It takes true talent to be able to put love into words, which most poets/writers can't. This was marvelous. Wonderfully beautiful. |
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Comment by: Min - 2006-03-04 11:13
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| Beautifully written. A short history of love as it changes during a lifetime. Thank you. |
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Comment by: - 2006-02-24 18:55
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True love. Loving more and more as time goes by. Terrifically traditional, something I am sure most of us can love. Glad I found your poetry.
Marc |
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