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lofty
lofty
United Kingdom, Bolton

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Moonchild

The moon shone bright
Perfect for the hunt
Teeth razor sharp
Gleaming
In the purple shimmer
Of lunar darkness
Last nights flesh hangs from my teeth
Stench of death on my rancid breath
Taste of copper still fills my mouth
Gushing
Spurting
Oh the feast

'Come on son we're in a rush
Go and give your face a brush'

'Coming mom'

God with her I'll lose all my cred
Wish I'd been born into the undead.

Zombie

Vampire

Or even a witch

Still

I love my mom

The bitch

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fredav Comment by: fredav - 2006-11-15 02:07
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hahahaha! Nice one here. I automatically thought about werewolves and then for some reason, towards the end, i thought about Grendel. You have a way with rhymes that I do not have. Good write. =)
lolly Comment by: lolly - 2006-11-02 01:54
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kewl. lolly waves to dead grandmother b and her dead gammy... both born on halloweeeeen....
Bebe Comment by: Bebe - 2006-09-18 11:29
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It's a good one David. Really enjoyed this lol. Could hear the Bolton accent.
rosysophia Comment by: rosysophia - 2006-09-16 12:47
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Ha, this is hilarious. Nice job.
Comment by: - 2006-08-26 09:28
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hahaha! this is awesome:-) love it. you're so good with the clever rhyme.
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