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Hollykinz
Holly Taylor
United Kingdom, Rushden, Northants

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A bit of attention

A stolen kiss in the snow,
A secret smile from afar,
Tears at midnight,
You.

The sun setting on a distant horizon,
Wishing you were with me,
Just to make me laugh,
Let me see the magic in your eyes.

Flames dancing on a candle wick,
As the thunder crashed above us,
Let me feel the rain on my face again,
Whilst holding your hand taking the pain away.

Lying on my bed,
A bottle in my right hand,
Pills in the other,
All I want is a bit of attention,

Smile at me again,
Make me laugh like you are the only person in the world,
Take the pain away,
Be a friend

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stu8rt Comment by: stu8rt - 2006-10-25 11:18
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The lows are the best time to scribble down the pain. Tell it from the heart sis. Nice.
kermit0702 Comment by: kermit0702 - 2006-09-28 07:19
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I enjoyed this, especially the haunting bit of a bottle in one hand and pills in the other...great stuff...x
CatmanStu Comment by: CatmanStu - 2006-08-24 20:33
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Great evocative writing, if a little disturbing in sentiment.

Cat. X
amel Comment by: amel - 2006-08-15 09:57
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highly moving...good job...
Comment by: - 2006-08-12 15:50
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Your words spoke it all, I was moved. thank you
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