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neil hinchcliffe
United Kingdom, lancs, bolton

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Keyboard Genius

Can you see the sad and desperate man
Sitting in his room
Typing at a keyboard,
Just watch his fingers zoom.

He's thinking he's a genius
With his funny little ways
But is this really the best way
To live out all your days.

As he writes another witty line
He pats himself on the back
Then you see him look at the rain
And leave the house in his mac.

A short trip to the liquor store
For a bottle of meths or two
Then back into his little room
For a snide remark at you.

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tathas Comment by: tathas - 2006-10-02 06:24
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Really enjoyed reading this one, except for the fact that it's kind of scarily close to the truth on many days. Really well done.
CatmanStu Comment by: CatmanStu - 2006-09-23 06:58
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Don't you just love those people whose bollocks just get too big for their pants as soon as thay get online.
Internet bully - what a great vocation to have on your resume.

Cat.
Comment by: - 2006-08-27 10:03
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These are very good words for this person. It is a shame he has to be this way. I like the rhyme you use here. This made me laugh and think if he has read this but I do not think he has. It is a very sad way to live. Teri is behind me yelling 'Pathetic parasite!' LOL!
audreymei Comment by: audreymei - 2006-07-31 13:45
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Lovely little piece.
The world is getting to be more and more like this.
I'm sitting in a wireless cafe in Mendocino, California, and people are
planted like zombies in front of terminals, including myself.
Instead of a bottle it's a cafe latte.

Let's just get out there and hug a stranger, why don't we?
oddfruit Comment by: oddfruit - 2006-07-31 10:57
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I have been asked to post this comment by a good friend who is no longer on SI
Keyboard GeniusOh Neil, I really did laugh out loud at this one for obvious reasons. I found it a little obvious but Iā??m guessing itā??s meant to be. Written with your usual flair and strong voice. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Bx
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