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dorothee
Dorothee Lang
Germany

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The white pencil

A shop filled with shelves filled with boxes and packages, a thousand coloured things on sale.
Next to me, a guy.
"Choose your gift," the guy says to me. "Just pick the thing you like, up to 15 Euro, I pay."
I stand and look, take things out of the shelves, turn them in my hand, put them back, until I find what I want: a pencil. In white. For 1 Euro.
"A pencil?!" the guy says.
I nod. And smile.

(A piece of a dream, May 2005, Mallorca)

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Comment by: - 2006-03-23 12:09
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Very good! Is this saying that you love to write? I think so! Good Job!
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Comment by: - 2005-09-25 09:02
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Nice flash. Adding that it was a dream at the end made me think that the pencil might have some phallic significance, especially as the implication was the guy was trying to pick you up.
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