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Bernadette
Bernadette Klubb
France, Somewhere in Aveyron

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Interfaces (a love story)

"Can you see?"ยจ the man said, pointing. "There, where the cloud breaks. The wisp behind."

The woman looked to the sky. A curl of Parma violets was visible, just. Then it was gone. There was a sigh in the man's voice.

"It's been a long time since I've seen that exact shade of mauve, violet...beautiful." He let the sentence drift away, an echo as faint as the colour he had admired.

The woman caught the moment, and pressed it. She wondered if the man had too. No-one noticed.

Others - friends, blustered ahead; jolly hockey sticks and scoutmasters. The dogs hung back, preferring the company of dreamers.

"We are searchers" said the man, as though himself trying to understand. "We are all searching, that's the important thing."

The woman agreed with him but did not say so. She had spent a lifetime searching. But that did not matter. If he had said "We are chimney sweeps", she would still have agreed with him. She lifted her face to see the expression he wore and his head bent towards her in response.

When their smiles met, unseen violet thoughts and stars swirled, celebrating what they shared, before falling to the earth - a gleaming, purple wake behind their booted feet.


*********


The long grass, damp from recent rain, did not rustle with the wakening of fairyland - and neither man nor woman knew, so precise was the mirroring of that smile, that it had fractured interfaces, exploded into worlds close by, summoned emotions in small, winged creatures, laughter faint beyond hearing, and like a peacock's fan a host of tiny eyes opened on the sight of the trail tapestried in purples through the grass.
"I will too."
"You ca-a-a-a-n't."
"Can too."
"No, but, she...."
"Can too. Will too! And you're to help me."

Two tiny figures flew in Ferris-wheel circles, pursuing the purple blaze born of the violet smile.

"They've made the lights!"
"But they're two times one!"
"No, no. If the lights are lit, then they're one time two!"
"No, no, no! She's one time two in green! Not purple!"
"Yah-di-yah-di-yah-da......so? He's one time two in every colour of the rainbow!"
"Well, I suppose...."
"Ha! I told you so - listen."

On the hillside where the people walked, chattering friends, exhausted putting the world to rights - and two immersed in the delicate affairs of discovery - elfin music played.

The gossamer wrap fell, it seemed, from the deepening twilit sky. A curl of violets.

"Catch it! Just catch will you!"
"Oh, I don't kno-o-o-w..."
"See the shimmering! Oh, look, look! Quickly now."

They flew together, upwards, in a perfect 'V', rods of light snaring either end of the cobweb weave and spindling it to fairy strength. The dance was begun in the world of men. Between and around the slow-walking seekers the fairy envoys threaded the hemp of wishing. The man and woman wondered, separately, at a momentary tautness in their stomachs and together freshened the pace in pursuit of their companions in the near distance.

"You left a wish then?"
"Yes. In the end - tenderness. You?"
"Tenderness - pah! - cardigan-and-crochet wishing! Mine was passion, pass-i-o-n, p-a-s-s-i- ----"

The tiny voices faded with all the company of fairyfolk, mischief and merry-making cast. Away into the close-by as wondrous and wondering as they had come, lights dimming to the colour of spent bluebells. What would the neither one time two, nor yet the two times one, conjure from such potent, fairy magic? Magic of which they did not even know they were possessed.


*********


The woman awoke in the early morning, uncomfortable in her skin. In the big, gold mirror by the landing window, her back drew light from a silver-slated dawn. She stared over her shoulder at the reflection, lips parted, thoughtful. Like petrol on water, like starlings' wings, her aura spilled metallic greens and violets along the restless muscles.

When the man awoke from his dream of cloudscapes he was refreshed. He thought about the woman who had helped remind him of the important thing - that he was a seeker. As he stretched into the new day he was unaware of the many-purpled aura that rippled easily around him. He had never felt finer in his own skin.

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Informal Grae Comment by: Informal Grae - 2007-04-28 08:02
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A special read, Bernadette. I've just re-read this again in my "Small Voices, Big Confessions" book, and really enjoyed the read. Your story stood along side the other stories and held its head up high.

I liked the dialogu without its "he said / she said" baggage, faerie is supposed to be ethereal and airy, fluent and fluid.

Well done - Grae
lofty Comment by: lofty - 2006-11-21 13:00
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ohhhh this is something very special... thanks for sharing.
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-02-10 20:10
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Our own Bernadette,

I think this may be the 253rd time I've read this, and each time is like falling in love again. "A curl of Parma violets was visible, just. Then it was gone." The placement of that one word "just" starts this whole magical trip. I'm in awe (still) of the talent you have, and it's just one word! That one word and I'm immediately in a fairyland!

I'm not kidding when I say I get goosebumps every time I read this. The fairy language is so perfect and sweet and I can almost hear them in my head (I think there's medication for this, isn't there?). To use a line I know will make you smile, this story makes me "swallow my face". And all the little hints and clues we get and you give us to exercise our little gray matter (or grey matter) is astounding.

Am I gushing? YES! You're just lucky I'm not girly screaming again. Now, write more gems like this and the others you have here! :) xo for your amazing talent
Bernadette Comment by: Bernadette - 2006-01-19 10:02
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Thanks for taking the time Berhundy (any reason for the odd spelling?) and rexoj - I'll be sure to reciprocate when next I'm having a read around.
B.xox
Comment by: - 2006-01-19 09:47
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i fairly enjoyed that story i will admit i got a little bit lost into who was speaking when you first introduced the fairies but once i got past that i got back into the flow of things. I like the description of the landscapes it makes the reader feel like they are actually there in the scene watchin the evnts you have written which is nice thank you for giving me the pleasure to read this piece.
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