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skettio
Kimberly Rodarte
United States, PA

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The Riddle

The old man walks with a cane
reminds me of the Riddle of the Sphinx,
a riddle no one can solve.
He says, "I think I'll take a walk"
and I wonder how he's not going to fall
staggering like a drunk with a disease.
Will power is stronger than strength
when your hair turns white
and even your skin feels old.

The pregnant lady waits in an airport
at 3 am for a flight anywhere
to escape people who won't listen
and voices that become hangmen's nooses.
She tries to tell herself
the baby doesn't have to take his name,
not in this generation,
yet she's afraid to fall asleep where rules change,
people change, everything changes sometime.

I graduated from college
with a bachelor's degree in English writing.
People ask me why and I can't answer
because the answer's somewhere inside
a lost body wandering; yet not moving
and I say to myself,
some go this way,
some go that way,
and some go no place at all.

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Comment by: - 2006-08-20 09:05
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I enjoy how you take these people and make them so interesting. To look at people we don't know and to try to think what they are thinking is difficult to put into a poem. You do a very beautiful job here with this.

Enrique
roy Comment by: roy - 2006-08-06 09:00
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This is a captivating story, your poem, it feels like a book, loaded with life stories, just shortened for time...show me to this story, please...
aviva Comment by: aviva - 2006-08-06 03:20
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you r simple brilliant with your work... you've highlighted different aspects of general life and at the end how beautifuly it comes to ones ownself... very nice
RoadPoet Comment by: RoadPoet - 2006-08-05 19:21
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Im blown away by this...absoulute genius about why people walk the paths in life of their own choosing. Love the juxtaposition of your life with 2 others to show the dissimilarities yet humaness that you all exhibit in this cross dialogue. Simply marvellous work.
suleem Comment by: suleem - 2006-08-04 18:01
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This is great writing. I really liked the way you took common circumstances and turned them into extraordinary scenes in this poem
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