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Be All
Whisper to me words
I thought I'd never hear.
Better yet,
Scream them in the
Thousand voices
That refused to
Say them before.
Become the
All encompassing
Everything I dream of
When I can no longer
Think of (my own)
Flawed imperfections.
Shine bright and
Twinkling when the
Night sky has no stars.
Without a question,
Clear away the clouds
That block my sun.
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Comment by: - 2007-02-15 22:05
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it realy doesn't ask for much!...only the basics.
great write. |
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| Parts of this poem have a lyrical quality. I like the commanding voice you have expressed here. This one should be read aloud :) |
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| Love-but very demanding love. The speaker wants their love to be perfect and inhuman, without flaws, while staying flawed their own self. Very well-written, and lovely on the surface, but I really sensed a dark and jealous undertone underneath. |
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