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About climbing the corporate latter at the expense of others.
Looking, looking
for any flaws in me.
I would agree
that like you
if one looks
they will find
that there are many, many
flaws for anyone to see.
Hurry, hurry
now go report
the flaws.
Don't delay your
truest cause.
Did you know
these imperfections
are the soul within me?
Are you honey
or the bee?
Forget the question
I felt your sting.
Burning bridges
for something seemingly
more perfect, but in reality
even more weak.
Now get along.
Don't waste any time
in your good guy disguise
making yourself appear
to make all those wrongs
so right.
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Stepping on someone to get where you want to go is never the good way to go. Somewhere along the line you will realize what you have done and wish you could go back and do it over again..the right way.
As women, I think we experiece this more then men.
Hmmm I like this. I read it through in one swoop and it has a comfortable rhythm going on. Yeah pal there are people that say they are more perfect than others...id rather not meet those individuals. Our fallicies and attempts at things mean we are alive...we are living. The good and bad things that happen mean we are able to express our humaness. This poem in rather a sweet casual way reinforces that point.
