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I love you
I love you
I will love you
beyond my dying day.
This truth
This one truth I grant you this will not fade away.
My soul is with you
My everlasting soul is with you every step of the way
I lied
I told myself it was not real, to let it go to not feel, but I lied.
My Love
My secret is that my love is for you from afar
and it's not a secret anymore
Your name
You have no name in my heart you are the soul I loved from the start.
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Comment by: zepol - 2007-07-14 07:26
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| This is a very nice poem. It is well expressed and is lyrical as well. Thanks for a good read. |
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| Well expressed. "You are the soul I loved from the start" is priceless. Who can deny having experienced this emotion? Greetings from a fellow north Texan! |
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| Profoundly written, and absolutely magical. |
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| This is wonderful, I could feel it all very clearly, as if it was yesteryear and I felt these feelings again. I miss it sometimes, being loved, being held, but fears and doubts and disbelief has stolen that from me, all I ever do is wonder now. I thank you for this, as it makes me believe in the hope that real love is out there for all of us :D Excellent piece! |
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