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oddfruit
neil hinchcliffe
United Kingdom, lancs, bolton

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Coffee for one

I often sit in a café, alone,
Stirring sugar to make it dissolve
In the bottom of the mug
To take the bitterness from the coffee.
Maybe a cake, or a biscuit or two
To nibble on while the liquid cools.

My eyes always wander to the people passing by
You have to have a window seat if you're sitting on your own.

Some are trudging, laden down with shopping,
Some are running, perhaps for a bus,
Some are talking on their phones,
And some are mumbling to themselves.

Their worries, their hopes, their fears, their joys
All of them are oblivious to me.
My phone beeps to life as I receive a message.
I see who it's from and delete without reading.

It may seem bleak, it may seem sad
But a coffee alone is sometimes a treat.
Although the coffee has to be sweet
To take the bitterness away.

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isismarie Comment by: isismarie - 2006-10-09 19:24
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The description is wonderful. You paint the picture beautifully with words. I love this piece. Its really wonderful.
CatmanStu Comment by: CatmanStu - 2006-09-23 06:53
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Awsome feeling of actually being there with this piece. Now here is the part where I ostracise from everyone. The last line of this poem changed the entire tone for me; it implies bitterness is present and so I got the sense of somebody shunning society, instead retreating within their own pain. Great write nonetheless.

Cat.
Comment by: - 2006-09-10 14:27
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I believe we all do this but you put a different message behind your poem. I enjoyed the reference to adding sugar to make the bitterness go away as if by knowing how being alone can be good we are adding a sweetness to our own lives. There are many messages to be interpreted from your poem and I enjoy poetry that can do this. Thank you, Neil.

Enrique
Comment by: - 2006-08-24 17:32
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Another people watcher. One can learn so much from such a pastime.
Being on one's own is not always as bad as people think. It gives one time to reflect.
I like this alot.
Comment by: - 2006-08-24 15:02
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I wrote 90% of my first book while drinking alone in a coffee shop. The people and the atmosphere are free, and the aroma awakens the senses. Nice observation!
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