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Haymish Lam
United Kingdom, Dorset

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Lives that walk in circles (A Sestina).

One of my most earliest pieces

A piece that has been revised...

For a day appears as any other through the passing of time,
Where nothing but the leaves of the elm declare her age
and the low lying clouds revolve around us where forms revive.
The same person where my soul running to shores where i'm firmly berthed,
I hear seconds blowing like sands arcing into the whistling wind's tune.
Where I often walk through the woods seeing the green hues change.

Waves of love curl the banks as moods change
undulating through urban alleys, with the scent of pungent thyme.
Pigeons in flight with dirt caked wings in squawking tune,
The buildings stand against the acidic rain; refusing creeping age.
Dispersed minds encased in the niche of profession's berths
and the Pangea of a single species never revived.

Few of my kin have hearts with no revive
and their vessels where the fleshy changes
have gone to ground through the spirit's birth
There they melt into ether to becoming the time
that resonates in my thoughts as he ages,
wrenching the mind as if to tune.

Days in the rain, I'll just sing a tune,
for there the sun will revive
again and again through the ages
day in'¦day out with life's changes
through time's past, limitless time.
Looking further now where the future is birthed


The birth
of hearing the chiming tune
in time
revives
changes
in our ages, as we age.

The glass of claret matures with age
As another child sees the world in birth,
friend or foe is time as discretions change.
As the words hush, you will hear this circular tune
To walk into the abbey where the last candle is revived
in the knowing that 'now' is not touched by time.

Copyright (1995) Haymond Lam.

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bella25 Comment by: bella25 - 2007-12-17 19:21
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This leaves me speechless. I am addicted to your words.

"The same person where my soul running to shores where i'm firmly berthed,"
Spinnekop Comment by: Spinnekop - 2007-06-17 13:02
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I wish that I could reciprocate in the same manner as when you lay pen to paper. Alas, I bow the knee. I've always seen you as a philosopher, this work confirms that suspicion. As foxfyre so aptly puts it, you do indeed weave images masterfully. What I like in this poem is that I can follow the progression and the conclusion is perfect, not obvious nor overstated. I like what the second last stanza does. As if to break the thought, as if to sift all the images that came before and draw from that the conclusion. Beautifully clever writing.
foxfyre Comment by: foxfyre - 2006-08-10 20:37
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this work is awe inspiring. You gently weave such vivid images for your readers. My personal favorite

Dispersed minds encased in the niche of professionâ??s berths
and the Pangea of a single species never revived.

Absolutely wonderful!
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-08-10 18:19
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*throws computer in trash* I quit. THIS is how poetry should be done! Where do things like this come from:

the Pangea of a single species never revived.

Where in that handsome, wonderful mind do these things hide? Do they just come springing out of you like BOING? It's amazing! Love you, my talented nephew, Aunty xoxoxox
nonalienabductee Comment by: nonalienabductee Online- 2006-08-10 15:33
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Wonderfully easy and natural sestina. Great, great stuff. This style is, now that I see it in your piece, perfect for discussing time and the circle of life: for in a sestina, as often is in life, nothing changes but re-arranges. Spiffy!
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