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lsjones
Logan Jones
United States, Georgia, Rome

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Necessity is a Greater God Than Truth

How do I tell her that leaving
the front door open in her enthusiasm
to catch the bus was a mistake;
that the driver, concerned with
spilled coffee, didn't see him,
warned too late by a yelp and a thud?

How do I describe that farm
without crying, that wonderful place
where all parents take dead pets
to frolic and chase chickens
and be happy and alive
in their children's minds?

How do I explain, when she asks,
why there's a spot in the garden
with no flowers?

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lasttoknow Comment by: lasttoknow - 2006-09-06 13:17
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wow. i like this one great job.
InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-08-11 22:50
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hmmmm- (I don't agree with the title, but...)lol
I like the second stanza. It paints such a vivid picture. The last stanza is well written but it throws the meter off.
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