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How can I describe what you are capable of invoking within me?
I know why I adore you so much.
I can say that the way you make me feel is like a box full of these wonders '¦..
~Star dust
~Sugar
~Gifts
~Giving
~Your hypnotic kiss
~Being lost in your eyes
~Receiving
~Creation
~Christmas
~Joy
~Warmth
~Peace
~Dreams
~ Laughter
~ A healing smile
~ Food for the mind
~Your sweet heart
~Together
~Sharing
~ A fantasy
~Wonder
~Your extended hand
~Song
~Happiness forever
~Infinite gifts stamped by your soul
(((((((((((I Feel Love))))))))))))
Your love '¦
is wonderful gift that I feel each time I think of you.
Your love gives so much.
Love is the greatest gift of all and I want to thank you for that
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A very positive poem in an often bleak poetic landscape. Poems like this are deeply personal and as such it can be hard for a reader to personalise with them, but the emotions and truth behind your words comes across well. Some of the words you chose were cliched being lost in your eyes etc but others were better, like stardust and hypnotic kiss, maybe more of the original ideas would increase the power of this.
A very good depection of the way you feel about love and all the joy it can bring. It is nice to see a positive outlook on love. I like the way you used the list, and the "I feel love" after it was expressed better then using a million exclamation marks.**
