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soloIQ
steve steve
United States

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Doris

She's always ready,
heels are low.
Keeps things hot,
Paints her toes.

Think she likes me,
told me so.
Said she'd break,
if I go.

Here to please,
won't say no.
Obeys my orders,
fast or slow.

Give her money,
when I'm through.
Yes she earned it,
thats not new.

Some they see her,
look with scorn.
Messed up hair,
stockings torn.

Most don't care,
just ignore us.
As I pay,
waitress Doris.

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lwallen Comment by: lwallen - 2007-10-29 09:36
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wondeful twist, i of course thought the story was about divorce.
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-01-25 15:28
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Write something new for god's sake.
adarkvision Comment by: adarkvision - 2006-12-08 14:38
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I was not expect it to boil down to how it turned out. THIS IS GENIUS!! Writers like you that make reading worthwhile!! Keep up the good work!
Hollykinz Comment by: Hollykinz - 2006-08-13 08:25
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Great twist at the end! The flow is great and makes it an easy read. Great job. H
lsjones Comment by: lsjones - 2006-08-12 20:26
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Awesome turnaround at the end. Very successful in it's deceit throughout.
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