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Comment by: lolly - 2007-02-07 22:51
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| i too liked the ending. back from a nice long hide myself. glad i found your stuff. like the in-your-face of it. cheers. |
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Comment by: history - 2006-11-04 06:51
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| One word my friend, IRONY. Google it. |
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| Liked it a bit but at a point it was like you were simply picking random words from a Thesaurus and slapping them on a page but I guess if you write for music then I would have to hear the music to understand the flow. |
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Describes every wanky poem I've ever read where the writer may have had a point to begin with, but then lost the plot when they shat a thesaurus on the page.
Cat. |
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| Loved this one Lana, i know plenty of people like this, and one comes to mind immediately |
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