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Kisses of Dawn
lips brushing together in soft strokes
as the blades of grass wisp quietly in the morning's breeze
hesitant glances one to the other with devilish grins
the eyes speaking of an innocent playfulness
light of the sun beaming its morning hello from afar
bouncing softly off her silky skin as he cradles her face
her smile fades, but is replaced with longing
and his features turn softer as he kisses her waiting lips,
passionately, lovingly'¦
he holds her tightly in his arms where she feels safe
eyes are closed as she tries to further bury herself in his enfold
then she looks up as the sun peeks out over the water,
the mountains bowing to the sun's warmth
and the trees reaching with all their might toward the heavens
'¦he kisses the nape of her neck, gently
and the chills he sends down her spine cause her heart to flutter
the radiance of the surrounding life shines within their souls
they two entwined, lost in each others embrace
neither knowing the end of themselves, feeling as one
the soft heat of dawn's sun kissing the silent night's cold away
bringing warmth to this young couple, so in love'¦
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| You most certainly know how to bring out the beauty that is in each woman.....romantic and sensual x Deborah |
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| Well Robert, I think I've said it once too many times. You would make a great romantic novelist. You capture vivid intimacy which every woman wants to hear, to taste, to feel. Bravo...now just concentrate on romance and before you know it, your back in business, he he. Your friend always. Joni |
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Comment by: - 2006-08-14 20:00
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| This oozes warm and sensuality accompanied with the a tenderness that makes me say....send me a man like THAT! -Leah |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-08-14 18:48
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| I knew you had it in you! Romance and no wrist-slashing! LOL! Very good, Robert. Sensual and passionate! Nice job. Enrrrrrrique's going to love reading this!!! (cuz then I won't have to hit you with him - haha) :) |
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Oooohhh, there you go with the sensual loving that we all know is buried deep inside you, Robert! I feel the love, and will be anxiously waiting for more!
'her smile fades, but is replaced with longing
and his features turn softer as he kisses her waiting lips,
passionately, lovinglyâ?¦'
....lovely lines for a poem dripping with soft kisses...YUM!!! |
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