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suleem
Suzanne Montpetit
Canada, British Columbia, Nanaimo

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Tu-lips

Tu-lips
red colored petals
pressed so firmly on wall-paper
green sleeves curve your stem
giving importance to the gesture.

Dipped into veneered paper
your firmly pasted presence
surrounds the room in your elegance.

Your rhythm tempers
a tapestry chair molded into your center
two lines hide to gather seems
pretending to be whole flowers.

A rose is lacquered black and bold
highlighted grey thorns protrude
disguising marks left by the last set of paper underneath.

What is the theory,
of flowers deflowered.
Vines that intermingle only to choke,
away a memory of when.
Where if all began and ended in one night.

One more twilight may pass
when you may be removed or impaled
against details of vivid stripes or circles
angled lines deform the nakedness under you.

One day erased, eradicated and destroyed
torn into pieces and painted over.
Forever lost but never forgotten.
To be found again in a decor
brought forward from the past.
By two lovers who love tulips.

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MaryannWebb Comment by: MaryannWebb - 2006-09-02 22:36
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Very elegant piece.. loved the 3rd and 4th lines especially, as they captured the intrinsic occurances in life that we tend to overlook from time to time.
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-08-16 10:45
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A lovely piece on wallpaper. I'm sure you could take this further: more layers and more depth, than is mentioned here, but I like to imagine the wallpaper of tulips that was chosen specially by those two lovers for their room.
skettio Comment by: skettio - 2006-08-15 12:03
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I absolutely love this! The poem is so elegant that I can see the elegance of the tulips. I like how the wallpaper is able to take in memories of the happenings of the room.
Persephony40 Comment by: Persephony40 - 2006-08-14 21:26
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Beautifully written...
"A rose is lacquered black and bold
highlighted grey thorns protrude
disguising marks left by the last set of paper underneath"
Very well worded, subtly hinting it's other meaning, as Leah mentionned.
Comment by: - 2006-08-14 19:39
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The memories that embed themselves in textures, images, with or without accompanying fragrance will forever be cherished. The fondness for tulips and the underlying double meaning is displayed gracefully. I can imagine the wallpaper. _Leah
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