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He squeezed and he yanked until his face turned blue
He used some cream but it only became worse
Mr.Twit suggested it was a curse
He pulled out books of witchcraft and so
He said the wrong words and was covered in snow
Mr.Twit was now freezing cold
And before you knew it his feet grew mold
He said the same words but in reverse
And thus he ended the curse
With a swish and a flick and a few magic words
Mr.Twit was surrounded by nerds
His zit was gone and soon so were the nerds
They were sent far to a pack of charging buffalo herds
Now this is goodbye, au revoir, adios
Stay online for my next poem is close
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LOL I loved your poem...Made me laugh heehee...Some advice though, you don't need line 15 and 16, too much of the same rhyme. Otherwise your poem is very well written. Keep on writing, you definitely have talent. WRITE ON!!!
