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bckid2005
bckid2005
United States, Nevada

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Picture Perfect Day

Feel the power of the heart
Through the winds our love does start
Like the river of the Nile
My love for you flows all the while

How much more can I take
Of the beauty I won't forsake
In my eyes you are the one
Through the waterfall we will run

Countless hours of running wild
Your eyes, they're so tender and mild
Bright orange sun sets over the mountain
While innocent little blue birds play in the fountain

Like all days that come to an end
In our minds time this one will spend
Tomorrow we go back to the grind
So keep the paradise in your mind

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InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-08-25 17:33
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I like the meter on this and each stanza works on its own. Good write.
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