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skettio
Kimberly Rodarte
United States, PA

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Separation Anxiety

He tells me there are donuts on the other side.
The other side is the accounting side of the offices.
And me, I belong on this side in sales.

There's a door, among other things, that separate us from them.

The door swings freely, but it is a clear division
of two different worlds.

Here it is not very quiet,
someone is always talking, laughing, or getting angry,
but sometimes you can't hear anything on the other side
except your own thoughts
of how they only pretend to accept you.

Our clothes aren't designer
and they look down because we wear the same shoes
more than twice a week.

As for the donuts, they would have shared,
but only after they picked through
claiming all the good ones for them.

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PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-12-09 21:34
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Yes the seperation of two classes. There is nothing more that makes me angry. I treat everyone (that deserves it) with as much respect as if they were rich or poor. There is no distinction to me. Money or a higher education does not give someone the right to descriminate.

Powerful write.**
jjsmith Comment by: jjsmith - 2006-10-07 06:52
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you make the accounting side
seem glamorous
and yet i thought
it was sales
that would have the donuts

the title separation anxiety
is perfect
henrydavidlau Comment by: henrydavidlau - 2006-09-22 18:45
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I really like this poem as an allergory to the state of our society and the problems we still face with segregration. I found the tone of this poem melancholy, moving and sensitively written - which was fantastic. I really enjoyed reading this.
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-09-18 16:37
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This was a funny but very well written truth about how we feel about our place in life. Social structure has helped create these feelings of not being good enough and it is up to each individual to tear it down.

A great read.**
Comment by: - 2006-09-07 19:04
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This is a very entertaining poem! It is humourous and yet honest and a little sad. You have captured so many emotions here. I did not understand "He it is not very quiet". Other than this I think you have done a wonderful job writing about this situation.

Enrique
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