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WOW!
This is something very special...excellent work. Emotive demonstration of the power of one small word, the weight. The struggle and conflict, the effort is tangible. I love this!
Kudos and thank you.
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| Lots of emotion. Good flow. On first reading, I didn't notice any problems. I encourage you to keep writing. I find that when I feel lost, hating myself, that writing is great therapy. It helps to release my feelings. ParchmentPoetry aka Janet |
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| A feeling many people have felt at one time or another. Nicely written. |
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i love it
i think everyone has felt this way in a point in there lives
youre such a good writer ^_^
luvluv
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Comment by: - 2006-08-17 12:06
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| I so feel this way. I too hate the person in the mirror. I look at pictures from a few years ago and at myself now and I don't know who that guy is. Very good poem. Good way of showing how awful and scary it is to grow older, especially since it is hard to feel wiser. |
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"Blue Water Baptism"
"Blue Water Baptism" is my second collection of poems ranging in topic from views on death, God, friendships, and society. These poems were written in the course of ten years and show the "20-something" state of mind that transitions into a "30-something" mentality.
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