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Comment by: Totem - 2006-12-19 18:42
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| This is well done. Your imagery is expressive and you make the person come alive to the reader by envoking sympathy. Impressive piece. |
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Great piece of writing! I love the way it all leads up to the last line - "What if I'm right?"
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Comment by: - 2006-09-02 19:26
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You have written a sad poem here about someone in pain. I like how you make this girl into all our 'problem'. We should all think about these people we see in pain and try to help them. I agree with Min though. I do not have much experience with mutilators but I can see how this is used for attention like a child and maybe they should be helped as we would a child.
You have made me realise how important we all must act. Muchas gracias, Tracey.
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Comment by: Min - 2006-09-02 09:06
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| Interesting poem. The self-mutilators I've come across have all been seeking attention, but often they were hiding other problems that they couldn't deal with on their own. |
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| I love this peom-very emotive etc. Although, Teri says she thinks all self-mutilators are attention-seeking...I have a small reply- what if they NEED the attention? |
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