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Scott Smith
United States, OH, HIlliard

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Was that a Kiss?

Was that a Kiss? #1

"Was that a kiss?" I said.

Felt more like the wind

Putting on its felt hat

Or the innocent laugh

Of a child Stuck in chocolate pudding.

Whatever it was,

I'm going back for more.

Was that a Kiss? # 2

One question that can make a man

Feel like a little dog with a game leg

Comes when some blowzy woman

With big, experienced lips

Gets in your face Before breakfast And howls,

"What makes you think

That was a kiss?"

Was that a Kiss? # 3

Smashed the sucker

With a forearm shiver

Watched him Pancake backwards

Then stagger up

On wobbly legs,

Spit in my eye

And calmly ask"

That all you got,

Big Boy, Or was that just a kiss?"

Was that a Kiss? # 4

My fingers searched the bowl

Looking for bonbons

Or lemon-filled jelly babies

Until I felt the smooth

Silver Hershey wrapper

Wriggling towards freedom.

Then I called out its name

Wondering, if it feared me

Or was it simply

Kisses on the run.

Was that a Kiss? # 5

Was that a kiss?

Why not ask if death Is real

or if the sun Shines in winter time?

In other words--

Why must you harry me

With rhetorical questions

When all I want

Is to cuddle In your lap Like a small, yellow dog?


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Mollyg Comment by: Mollyg - 2007-02-24 06:59
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This was very original and creative. I love the descriptions of all the kisses, and the one chocolate one that we all adore. I enjoyed the read.
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-09-20 14:31
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Again, I love how this is broken up and describes the same thing in a different way. Where have I been?!?

Very much enjoyed.**
Comment by: - 2006-08-18 11:30
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Nice descriptions of love through others eyes. You have a great thing here. I think that the rythym propels itself out of the page and into your minds eye.

Thanks for sharing
psgri2003 Comment by: psgri2003 Online- 2006-08-17 19:27
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i thought this was amazing. the pacing, imagery and crispness of the whole piece worked briliantly, a great read.
nonalienabductee Comment by: nonalienabductee - 2006-08-17 18:30
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One of the few things I've read that had been screwed over by the format system (right?) and I didn't care one little bit. Really good, very original. Perfect kiss-sized snippets of life.
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