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psgri2003
Paul Grimsley
United States, Florida, New Port Richey

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flyspeck soul in the whiteheat maelstrom

murder was a question life asked of him
he was a friend to death painted in blood
the bird skull path of youth he walked
the crushed map of a torn ashen body
he can taste tomorrow in the tongue of another
all the killing tastes like seaspray salt
and he strides through the laced up shadows of alleys
to unpin the flesh from the writing wall
and let the scarlet tide unwrap in scarves
from the vault of ivory skin that hugs contours
to embrace the heart of the blade and to know
that whatever comes your way won't interrupt the flow

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InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-08-18 11:15
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I really liked the last line. I am not really sure why though because it kind of threw me off the course of this piece as I was interpreting it. No matter, I still liked it.
"Murder was a question life asked of him" ~ Yeah...
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