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mejaflora
Ida Gul
Singapore, Singapore

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in love

the love we see
we hold
is the love of life
the love of friendship
the love of lovers
the love of family

we are one
not two
not three
just one

it's a bond
we can never break
never crush
never leave

it's the beginning
and the end

no matter what we do
what we destroy
what we kill
at the end
there is still love

even if its hidden
and unseen

its there

waiting

and hoping

that one day
it will be
one with us again

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InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-08-18 20:28
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I liked the simplicity of this piece as well. You said so much with so few words. Great write.
psgri2003 Comment by: psgri2003 - 2006-08-18 19:33
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i'm not sure what to say except that this touched a nerve and chimed with my own thoughts on the subject. i loved the simple direct way in which your ideas were expressed.
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