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PiscesQueen
Avah Love
United States, ohio, Toledo

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Nicole

Pitiful to see your

Infantile game

But, for that,

You have yourself to blame



Only for an instant

You had Jake's affection

Because he was plagued

With a lonely erection



Don't be depressed

When he forgets your name

Between his sheets

Is your lonesome fame



I'm the love he needs

I'll always be his selection

Even while you cling to him

Like a pussy infection

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PiscesQueen Comment by: PiscesQueen - 2006-08-21 08:39
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Yes, I know it's a bit humorous. I'm glad you all got a laugh...I know I did. I know it isn't my best poem, but I had to vent...lol.
cinders Comment by: cinders - 2006-08-21 08:18
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Okay, I laughed too. Future lyrics for a female punk rock band? :)
roy Comment by: roy - 2006-08-21 01:04
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Ha Ha...and...ouch @ "Like a pussy infection" really better than clawing like a cat...expressing your bitching through poetry...like a true pisces....funny, bold and great entertainment, thanks for the read
PiscesQueen Comment by: PiscesQueen - 2006-08-19 16:59
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Well, I don't think she'll find it humorous, but I sure did. TY glad you enjoyed it
barry edwards Comment by: barry edwards - 2006-08-19 16:56
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love this; brave and bold and with a withering streak of humour too. great write, great read.
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