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Beangle and Floweezle
'I wonder if it's alive?'
Said Beangle to Floweezle.
'Try poking it with a stick,'
Said the latter to the former
'But I don't have a stick'
Said miss B to master F
'Then just use your leg'
Said the elder to the younger
'But I don't want to hurt it'
Said Beangle to her brother
'Well it's jumped back in the lake'
Said Floweezle to his sister
And the frog swam away
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What can i say but that ive been reading too much Lewis Carroll to my daughter lately
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Comment by: Min - 2006-09-16 14:40
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Always it has to be poked with a stick. Exactly the right conversation. Wise frog to have jumped back in the lake.
You'll find that the borrowgroves have gone all mimsy if you carry on like this. |
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| LOL...very cute. You must be quite the riot of a dad to those gorgeous girls of yours. Do you read cute stories to your better half too?..;-) lol |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-08-24 20:58
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ROFL @ David!
Neil, you should expand these characters more. I love the way they "sound"! Seriously, this is adorable and very charming. Kids would love this stuff. T. xo |
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Comment by: - 2006-08-24 15:00
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How funny, and yes, I have read way too many kids authors, and big kid authors like Carrol and Dahl.
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Comment by: roy - 2006-08-21 01:07
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| yup..this is cute, i am going to share it with my kids, a fairytale of sorts, nicely written as well. oved the line..??But I don??t want to hurt it?...very gentle, indeed. Thanks for the read |
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