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neil hinchcliffe
United Kingdom, lancs, bolton

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Bonnie

Written for Bonnie while talking into the early hours of the morning

Eyes of green
Hair of gold
A look to break
The hardest soul.
An innocent yet
Wicked grin
That betrays the
Mind within.
Poets soul
Tender heart
Mother, lover
Dirty tart.
Artists muse
Drinking mate
A girl that couldn't
Instil hate

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JohnnySodoff Comment by: JohnnySodoff - 2006-09-27 13:30
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I like the rhythm of this poem. Also, yeah, it's very sweet.
CatmanStu Comment by: CatmanStu - 2006-09-23 06:39
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I have to reiterate the sentiments so far; wonderful tribute to a wonderful person.

Cat.

PS - One question - Shouldn't dirty tart read, really really dirty tart?
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-09-16 14:34
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A wonderful pen portrait. If you two ever meet up she won't be able to keep her hands off you.
Kerosene Comment by: Kerosene - 2006-09-02 13:06
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A dirty tart, now that gave me a chuckle. Well done.
Comment by: - 2006-08-27 09:57
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This is a beautiful tribute to a beautiful woman no-one could hate. I will bet she is very proud you have written this to her. As Yvy says everybody loves Bonnie.
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