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LadieLincoln521
Angela Ellington
United States, Arkansas and Illinois, Lonoke and Evanston

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No New Lessons

This world is in a whirl of chocolate and vanilla swirls, with little girls wearing pearls and bright red lipstick. We're so quick to pick the sick and toss them away and say, 'Why don't you stay in this place with white walls? In this place where there's people like you living down every single hall?' While we decide to reside in our houses not hearing how they replied and denied the desire to retire in such a place. We're so caught up in the techno, the retro, and the cost of petrol, that we don't know our children are begging to be loved. All we do is work to maintain, but then we complain about the chains that our jobs have us in. And all the while the child is wishing for a bed time story. To be tucked in and begin the process of peaceful sleep, but the parents keep to themselves while the child counts the sheep. Unwatched, he listens to bad music with good beats, walking down dangerous streets, not knowing who he will meet, and he repeats what he sees being done in the streets: bad things until he takes a seat in front of a jury and judge. But who are we to hold a grudge when it's apparent that his mistakes are the fault of his parents. The child didn't know that he should show respect wherever he goes and should grow with Christ in his life. But the world will never see how things are and should be, and on and on it turns, but no new lessons are learned.

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zepol Comment by: zepol - 2007-10-14 20:08
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Angela, I like the content but it felt a little bland. You're headed in the right direction so I'll come back to read your edits.

peace
IIZZYY Comment by: IIZZYY - 2007-08-25 20:46
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that was a nice read...
Comment by: - 2007-05-08 09:40
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A really great piece! I was not sure where it was going but I liked the conclusion and how it fit into the title. As a person who grew up with my dad telling me bedtime stories I love that you included that.
xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-03-24 05:37
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I enjoyed this poem very much, it's deep and it speaks so many truths.Perharps though you might want to fix the structure so people get the essence of the poem by breaking it up into stanzas, just a suggestion.
Grounded Vertigo Comment by: Grounded Vertigo - 2007-03-22 09:06
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The rhythm and flow of this writing is amazing! You write very honestly and directly which I really like. Well done!
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