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PiscesQueen
Avah Love
United States, ohio, Toledo

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Craved

Christening kisses
of displaced taste
embark their journey
during souls embrace
embracing bodies
intertwine through night
discovering passion
to feast the crave
craving fed
starvation disgraced
sweat on the sheets
ecstasy clings

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RoadPoet Comment by: RoadPoet - 2006-08-29 18:03
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This is a piece full of sexual energy, almost as if sex were a primal instinct to satisfy emotional appetites. Great rhythm, this needs more readers!
jjsmith Comment by: jjsmith - 2006-08-26 04:08
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love that ecstasy clings
Comment by: - 2006-08-26 01:53
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Gorgeous and vivid.

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