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rabableo
Rabab Khan
Pakistan, Islamabad

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The Innocents

She believed in angels,
in starry nights and
rainbow coloured dreams.

She believed in smiles,
in flying bears and
bright pink fairies.

She believed in love,
in joyful giving and
warm glowing togetherness.

This little dove,
In a dress stained crimson
and cheeks lacking skin,
What does she believe now,
as she lies strewn over the battle field?

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Kerosene Comment by: Kerosene Online- 2007-05-15 07:48
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Seriously powerful. Simple words put together in an extraordinary way. The glaring images of blood really stare the reader down.

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digs Comment by: digs Online- 2007-02-18 10:18
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Incredibly sad and disturbing piece, Rabab.
Comment by: - 2006-10-12 05:26
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my response to your poem is a slight shaking of my head and wonderment...you have captured how i feel about war and death in this poem...how the senseless nature of it comes to me the older and older i get...thank you for writing it....
frozen Comment by: frozen - 2006-10-07 11:56
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hmmm...gud u started doing productive work;)
FredaJane Comment by: FredaJane - 2006-09-09 20:53
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Hi Rabab, this is the first of your poems I have read and I enjoyed its simple eloquence. You not only ask the reader to consider how a child's beliefs might change in such horrific circumstances but your question also infers that the onlooker's beliefs have been forced to change. It's a very thought provoking poem and I think you carried it off well.
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