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murphi0us
Maurice Murphy
United States, TN, Cleveland

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The Blackened Leaf

THE BLACKENED LEAF


 


The blackened leaf falling to the ground


Scorched and burned by worlds on fire


My life was this before I was found


 


Drop it


Plant it


Let it die


 


Shed blood covered cleansed the black


Covered the leaf created a tree


An oak of Righteousness


Rooted grounded in the soil of Christ


 


Drop it


Plant it


Let it die


Let it Live


All you have


You must give


Let it Die


 


The fire comes again to blacken burn and destroy


The world overtakes with cares and strife


Covers that tree engulfed with flame


Burned and battered the tree became 


  


All fruit now gone left only seed 


 


Drop it


Plant it


Let it die


Let it Live


All you have


You must give


Let it Die


Let it Die


Let it Die


Let it Die


Let it


Die


Die


Die


 


With first love single in your eye


Blackened tree standing tall


For all to see for all to know


Roots gone deep into solid ground


Through fire and rain it will not fall


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TequilaTwilight Comment by: TequilaTwilight - 2007-02-21 04:16
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i think this poem has a powerful message with consequential undertones, i really like it. It's dark and emotive.
ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2007-01-20 11:50
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I loved the layout of this, and you made leaves seem so eerie and unearthly.

What inspired this piece?

Stunning and graphic piece.

I saw a million colours emerging within your words.
Kerosene Comment by: Kerosene Online- 2007-01-12 09:38
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Maurice, this is fantastic. Im sad I havent read it until now. Reads very fresh and has an awesome message.

Favorite line: Shed blood covered cleansed the black

Again, well done.

john
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-08-28 18:31
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Wow. This is the first thing I've read by you, and it's extremely impressive! It made me think of a strong faith, a desire to conquer all strife with Love and Compassion. It could be a song it's so lyrical and rather delicate, yet your message is strong and clear. Fantastic poem. Bookshelved. Thank you for this gift.
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