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A Simple Turn
A Simple Turn around my Corner,
Has Changed my Life for sure.
If I hadnt seen you in the rain,
I'd know not of the Cure.
The Months I suffered were not in Vain,
The reason now is Clear.
You pointed me in new directions,
You took away my fear.
The operation saved my life,
I see life now anew.
Each new day brings strength for me,
I owe it all to you....
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| I hope you told Vicky that you wrote this - she would be ecstatic for it. I guess this means that there is no need to put too many words to paint too vivid a picture - this poem may not venture too much in the color spectrum in terms of words, but it's good just to put the message where it should be - simple and sweet as sugar. |
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Comment by: masque - 2007-06-14 18:07
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| Lovely, simple flow, but accurate and emotional as well. |
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| Wow. Very powerful stuff, Anthony. Very touching and well-written. |
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| Very nice dedication |
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| dedicated to Vicky, whose battle with cancer and strength helped me to overcome my own battle and give me the strength to go on. |
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