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Comment by: Teri - 2006-09-03 15:04
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| Very nice tribute to your princess. *smiles* Sweet and wistful, as Stevie says. And trust me, same as Enrique - fools do make their princesses laugh, and it works. Helps banish the past cobwebs from the crown, if you will. Wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing. Teri xo |
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Comment by: - 2006-09-02 13:38
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But fools make princesses laugh, and if you can make your princess laugh, you are winning. This is a beautiful poem. It is honest and sincere, very romantic and full of hope to someday win her.
Enrique |
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Poignant and beautifully wistful.
"the void / Between two hearts that touch / For fleeting moments" and "Surprised dreams leaving stains / Not discovered until the morning after" were a couple of lines that especially stood out. |
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| Lovely tribute to your princess. Sometimes fools are the most cherished possession. I like to think that since I've been a fool most of my life, maybe prince charming will come along and take me away from my run-down castle. Cheers to all the hopeful fools! Great poem. |
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Comment by: - 2006-08-29 05:14
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| This is a tender and charming poem. Your princess would be honored to have such a "fool", I should think. _Leah |
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