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TequilaTwilight
Mercedes Dawson
United Kingdom, Manchester

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I Am Borrowed

I am my mother's confessional ears,
the nose and tolerance of my father,
the strength they both provide.
I am my neighbour's passivity,
the laughter and comfort of my friends'
the seek from which I hide.

I am indefinably defined,
etched inside frames by the
histories who stood there to learn
the textbook I have been written.
I am more than a certificate
twenty one years young but
cannot forge the DNA to lie.

I am the inequality of my sex,
the intelligence of average,
the statistic of my population.
I am the eyes of innocence,
the naivety of my own youth,
the seed of the All's creation.

I am the despair of the lonely,
spawned hatred of the persecuted,
the fear of those who cry away.
I am the anger of my position,
the fire of the blood boiled before me,
the words they all want to say.

I am all things false and true,
the essence of me, the reflection of you.

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bella25 Comment by: bella25 - 2007-12-17 19:09
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This is beautiful. The imaginery produced by your words are amazing.
Glen aka FAD Comment by: Glen aka FAD - 2007-11-05 08:42
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A downward spiral of words to describe the meaning to the intent of your words...

Glen Yumang Manese
SacredV Comment by: SacredV - 2007-09-13 07:04
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This is Great....Read Out-Loud It Would Kick Ass. It Has A Very Personal Tone To It That Reaches Out To The Reader....The Final Two Lines Are The Perfect Completion To This Piece...They Provide A Sense Of Power And Strong Finality. The Third Stanza Pops out The Most For Me Along With The 3 First Lines In The Beginning....It Started Great, Followed Through and Ended Perfectly. Nicely Done.
lolly Comment by: lolly - 2007-09-03 12:34
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i like the way you start then round you go until the circle is complete.
kylalynn Comment by: kylalynn - 2007-08-22 11:55
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I love this one as well...being a Gemini, I feel like the final 2 lines describe me. My favorite line in this piece, however, has got to be:
"the seek from which I hide"

Beautiful...again.

Color me envious.
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