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There is a place
A light place
A place whereby you would see
love in its truest state
It is the Ocean of love
When you dive into it
You never get drowned to death
When you bump into it
you never get hurt
Instead,you grow strong and calm
Its a sense of a new awakening
A state whereby people hardly realise
A place its difficult to believe exists
That place is the true nature of the human being
Meanwhile,it's just the beginning of the
journey of the true life
A journey to unveil the golden sparkling light
in the innermost core of the fool.
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I love your last line! Great way to end this piece! I would recommend going over the second and last stanzas and re-breaking the lines. If you work with them, I am sure you will be able to see where you can break them and even invoke more meaning and metaphor!
I enjoyed reading this poem. I think the funny thing about love - even in its truest form/s - is that we are ultimately - at one or another point in our own individual journey's.....a fool. :o) Great read.
