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Persephony40
Voula Dervos
Canada, Quebec, Laval

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The Perfect Fit

On this hot, sultry night,
my hunger cannot be contained.
The very thought of having you,
sets my mouth to watering.

You are the envy the world over,
for you are unique.
It has been said many times,
they all yearn to be you.

How much more can I wait,
until I can finally taste you?
To feel you in my warm mouth, to
savour the essence only you possess.

As the temperature rises,
so does your size, almost doubling.
I am amazed at how thick you are,
would my mouth be a perfect fit?

Tentatively, I touch you,
for your heat scalds me.
Inching you towards my mouth,
I lick my lips in preparation.

Mmmmmm, you smell so good, as
I slide you slowly in.
Why did I wait so long,
I couldn't stand it anymore.

Quickly I take a bite,
yum, delicious, just as I thought.
Oscar Meyer, where have you been
all my life?

(Teehee)

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Breathe Comment by: Breathe - 2008-01-13 15:07
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Oh, its a hotdog, not a penis.... I'm a bit letdown.

But great use of irony.
RJWilliams Comment by: RJWilliams - 2007-05-12 22:13
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lol good tease!
RoadPoet Comment by: RoadPoet - 2007-04-25 15:15
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I thought this was an erotica piece until you stumped me at the end and so much of this piece had me exclaiming 'ohh err this is a bit of a saucy piece' then reading on bam 'a mention of the makers of the Weinermobile (cracks up). Thanks for this piece making me chuckle like a 2 year old :-)
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-10-24 20:21
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Just noticed your question. Yes, I did. His ears only bled for an hour. :D

BTW, I wish I had a camera to capture the look on his face when he read "Quickly, I take a bite". Ha!
YeOldeFart Comment by: YeOldeFart - 2006-09-28 02:19
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Now I know why the words to the song go, "I wish I were an Oscar Mayer..." You had this Olde Fart blushing until the end. Then I literally burst out laughing. Well done.
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