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Tev Kaber
United States, MA, Worcester

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no toy

She says in her childhood
there was no playing
no toys
and little laughter

I ask her about
those little nesting dolls
if she had those at least

she laughs
and tells me
they were only a tool
for local drug dealers

the dolls glued shut
to hide
a sinister cargo

and if you saw a nesting doll
lying in the street
you had better walk
the other way

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Boonrassi Comment by: Boonrassi - 2007-07-27 15:22
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nice use of 69 words
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Boonrassi Comment by: Boonrassi - 2007-07-27 15:22
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nice use of 69 words
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jkaber Comment by: jkaber - 2006-08-30 04:44
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I agree, this is very powerful. Not keen on the title though. I think such a sharp poem deserves better.
lsjones Comment by: lsjones - 2006-08-29 22:59
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Wow...this is a really powerful poem written with very few words. I love poetry like this. Extremely nice write. Bookshelved.
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