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Tev Kaber
United States, MA, Worcester

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embarrassed

He speaks
at length and in bright detail
the squeezing of zits
on his girlfriend's back

In boastful voice
he announces to the world
that his cock
could fell a tree

He tells a girl
that he likes the way
her tits bounce
when she runs

I envy his ease
his ability not just to speak
but to proclaim
those things
that just thinking make me blush

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Comment by: - 2006-09-15 19:07
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It's nice to see someone else is embarrassed by what other people do. I liked your poem because you're not afraid to admit it. bye Doris
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-09-01 12:46
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HA! I can relate. Interesting viewpoint on something not everyone feels or thinks about. I like it! And stop making your mother go insane and tell her. :)
jkaber Comment by: jkaber - 2006-08-30 11:42
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Hmm. No, you'll have to send me an email and tell me. Can't picture who it is. Someone who thinks their cock can fell a tree? Now I'm dying of curiosity!
terminus Comment by: terminus - 2006-08-30 08:36
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Haha, she can probably even guess who the poem is about.
Comment by: - 2006-08-30 08:14
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This last line remind me of someone I know. This is very honest and sincere. I like how you do not hesitate to write this where your mother can read it. LOL!

Enrique
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