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And Stuff
And Stuff
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lost in you

It's another card night
We're all here
Laughing, talking, yelling
But you are the one that I notice the most

You have the most wonderfully warm laugh
And your blue eyes always sparkle when the light hits them

Another card goes down
Your smile is still there
I have to be told it's my turn
Because I've gotten lost in your smile
Lost in your laugh

You rake your fingers through your hair
Now it's all messed up
And you look even cuter as you laugh

It's my turn again
But I don't know that
Because I'm lost in you

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Comment by: - 2006-08-31 00:27
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This poem is really sweet. The little details give a lot of life to this account of an incipient crush.
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