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Dolphin67
Belinda Celayir
United States, Florida, Fernandina

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"4 Mothers Wishes"

I missed this year, with my son.

Hope and pray, his life's still fun.

To see his face, hear his voice again.

To let him know, he's my best friend.


We are the same, in many ways.

He cooks so well, looks & smiles 4 days.

Need & want him, back in my life.

Can't stand his dad, thankful not his wife.

Am finally free, can't get to me.

I only want, our son Jeremy.


He is my life, my goal to save.

Plus moms' ashes, from her grave.

Makes no sense, that this is real.

4 mothers wishes, may have to steal.

Get back from them, love from my son.

Must undo, any damage done.

These two things, & I'll be through.

Can move on, & stay true.

If you can help me, from above.

Will have forever, my 'UNCONDITIONAL LOVE'.


07/02/06

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MoganaLeFe Comment by: MoganaLeFe - 2007-06-02 18:35
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I really liked this one as well... Told alot about your suffering...

Try short stories, You can do it.. I see it in your writing, let it flow to you pen...

Blessed Be,)0(
maryannestahl Comment by: maryannestahl - 2007-03-26 16:36
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heartfelt sentiment. what if you eliminated the rhyme and let powerful images carry the poem? maybe do several different versions. I like to do that sometimes.
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