"Bad Girl"
SHE MEANS NO HARM, NO DISRESPECT
THE MORE SHE WINES, THE MORE TIME SHE GETS.
WHEN SHE GOOD, SHE REALLY BAD.
DON'T EVEN KNOW WHEN THEY BEEN HAD.
HOW EASY WE CAN PLAY THEY GAME.
THEY DON'T KNOW (SHIT), SO THEY CAN'T BLAME.
SO PLAY THE GOOD GIRL, LIKE YOU BEEN,
CUZ ONLY WE KNOW, BAD GIRL WILL WIN.
08/07/06
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Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-03-13 19:31
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I liked this. Really effective for a short write.
I changed the rhyme scheme a little, hope this helps.**
SHE MEANS NO HARM, NO DISRESPECT
THE MORE SHE WINES, THE MORE TIME SHE GETS.
WHEN SHE GOOD, SHE REALLY BAD.
DONā??T EVEN KNOW WHEN THEY BEEN HAD.
HOW EASY WE CAN PLAY THEY GAME.
THEY DONā??T KNOW (SHIT), SO THEY CANā??T BLAME.
SO PLAY THE GOOD GIRL, LIKE YOU BEEN,
CUZ ONLY WE KNOW, BAD GIRL WILL WIN. |
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