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Eric
Fat kid dressed all in red
Bobble hat sits upon his head
The world to him makes no sense
So he feels he has to vent
Fat kid spouts his vial abuse
Being young is his excuse
He can say what we all feel
Protected by his youthful zeal
Fat kid doesn't understand
Won't bury his head in the sand
Rapists, racists, paedophiles
Fantasy to the mind of a child
Fat kid disrespects all we do
Hypocrisy not a part of his credo
We all laugh at his disdain
Then to feel the twang of shame
We see the flaws, we see the cracks
We understand why he attacks
But hypocrisy makes us tame
Eric would just call us
LAME
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I have no idea who Cartman is, but this is a good piece, nevertheless. It has such a fast pace to it and a silly undertone that one doesn't have to know who you're talking about to get it.
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Nice write, but smoking and all the other things kill you one way or another. But throat cancer is a horrible thing, and so is heart problems. Sorry, i am a very adament anti-smoker and always throw in aRGUMENTS AGANIST. Apart from my disagreement with your last line, the rest is fab.
Oh, hang on, wrong poem. Crab people rule! |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-09-03 15:00
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| Aw, I love Cartman! He says what many feel. (I especially love the tea party with Polly Prissypants and Clyde Frog, which almost made me hyperventilate, and when he sings "In the Ghettooooooo".) I love how you've made him come alive. I was reading this thinking, "This sounds like Cartman." lol Sorry, but he does crack me up. Rotten child. :) |
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| Wonder how Parker & Stone would feel, knowing that someone out there has written an ode to Cartman...? Expect to see a poem called "Crab People" next. |
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Comment by: JCR - 2006-09-01 03:04
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| Yeah Dude! I love Eric too, but he is a creation - I wonder if any of us could live up to his "credo"? "We see the flaws, we see the cracks - We understand why he attacks", Great line. |
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