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Mernard
Marcus Keeley
United Kingdom, Belfast/Norwich

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Shell

Did a part of you die,
When you submitted yourself?
Time and time again, telling a lie?
To him, to her - yourself?

Cover yourself up,
You're better than this.
Get up off the ground.
I'd never, never - I wish.

Look at your eyes? There's nothing behind them.
Magnetic black holes, pulling.
Drawing in, a total mystery.
But nothing ever returns.

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hatchzel Comment by: hatchzel - 2007-01-08 21:15
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Enigmatic! I will read the rest of your pieces after work. Keep it up
hatchzel Comment by: hatchzel - 2007-01-08 21:15
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Enigmatic! I will read the rest of your pieces after work. Keep it up
hatchzel Comment by: hatchzel - 2007-01-08 21:14
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Enigmatic! Short but powerful. I will read the rest after tomorrow's work, I am sure you have more wonderful pieces
alaska Comment by: alaska - 2006-11-16 05:27
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cryptic and doleful. I like it yet agree with the heidrunknik....comment; It could do with some ironing out. That is to say its worth ironing out. It is sharp and vociferous. Glad to read it. Oh, and thanks for your comments.
spyderpoet Comment by: spyderpoet - 2006-10-04 18:39
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I like it a lot.. am looking forward to reading the rest of your poems. :)
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