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Her sarcasm
an origami dagger
rendered artfully
wielded deftly
so beautiful in her hands
that I cannot help but admire it
even as it protrudes from my chest
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and who says sarcasm is the lowest form of wit? great write, really like the lyrical deftness of this and the way that its twisting rhythmn is almost suggestive of the act of origami.
