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Groovy
Whatever man, like it's not my gig. nuthin but hassles and letdowns. the man just likes to keep us down. lets fly this scene and go make our own thing happen. just the hip and the cool will be there. we can just start over and enjoy each other. no boney finger pointing at us. what will be.. will be.. and if someone rocks the boat then he shouldn't of left the shore and will get the hint soon enough.there will be one law. dont be a jerk to anyone or we cut your rations in half. do it again and we cut em in half again. they will die or leave. well maybe 2 laws. no chicks with beehive hairdos or anything too poofy. o and no guy homos, girls are ok. ......ok 3 laws, all girls must go both ways. hmm maybe we need to form a group of people to make this all work in a structured civilized way and even elect others to lead our new government..................O just forget the whole thing and get back in line you filthy hippies !
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Comment by: Juan2 - 2007-02-09 20:40
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ha, an amusing little whirl through a loopy mind. I like the way it ends with that contradiction, and the fact that the narrator can see what path he's heading down. Oh, and that 3rd law, sounds groovy to me, man.
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